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Creating Sentence Suspense #4

Creating Sentence Suspense #4

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Nina Schuyler
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It being a clear day, they follow the helmet all the way down, not saying anything, just leaning out and watching it, squinting their eyes from the sun reflecting off the surface of the bay, and hear…

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