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Rosalind's avatar

Such an interesting sentence, once again!

I had a go....

She looks hopefully through the oven door willing it to rise, this cake, it is expanding and has to be perfect; she looks again and despondently sees it has sunk, this cake, the sides high and the middle caved in.

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Muireann O'Callaghan's avatar

Each time we stood lined up, dad’s voice bellowed orders, pointed out our imperfect execution of chores, commanded we be better if we wanted to earn outside game time; each time we sat around the table, dad lowered his chin to pray over our meal, paused, and chirped with poetic reassurance that we were blessed.

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