2 Comments

Your analysis of sentence structure is, well, amazing and at a level that, well, I'd be hard pressed to equal. I tend to go with more visceral patterns -- flow, pacing, word-choice, images -- in my writing. In my current project, a first novel, each 'chapter' takes the POV of a single character and I am now at the stage of trying to hone down each to the 'style' of thinking, speaking of that particular character.

You've given me a new idea for this process, which is decidedly analytical. Thank you.

Expand full comment