Only me here this time? Oh well, here are my two attempts at mid-branching sentences.
1. As she waited at the station for the train to pull in, her resolve, bolstered by spikes of pain from more recent bruises, but weakened by the knowledge that where she was headed there would be no-one to help her, was only just alive.
2. From the front gate to the neatly tiled porch, his garden, trimmed and shaped in accordance with some hard geometry he found pleasing, told the story of his life.
Only me here this time? Oh well, here are my two attempts at mid-branching sentences.
1. As she waited at the station for the train to pull in, her resolve, bolstered by spikes of pain from more recent bruises, but weakened by the knowledge that where she was headed there would be no-one to help her, was only just alive.
2. From the front gate to the neatly tiled porch, his garden, trimmed and shaped in accordance with some hard geometry he found pleasing, told the story of his life.