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Hi Nina,

It's hard to add anything to your excellent analysis. I agree on everything, the lovely metaphor that slides in with the sand, the strange feels of cleaning and sweeping different mediums, the cat and sea almost trading typical actions, then the cyclic return to the start. It is hard to read a sentence like this without seamlessly gliding along its images, feeling them but not quite grasping them on first read. Lovely sentence.

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