Oh, exactly! I have never heard of it being pronounced that way! Yes, I love your emphasis! I hope to share today’s sentence (with credit given to you), with my students.
Thank you for this. I love that you, as a fiction writer are so aware of sounds. You are teaching me (a poet) about plosives. Love how you talk about hard stresses. Please correct me if I'm wrong--but I don't think "tanks" would be included in the assonance--since assonance, too, is about sounds. The long _a_s and not the short _a_ in "tanks." And, yes, congrats on the Pushcart.
The Neighborhood's Night-time Face
Oh, exactly! I have never heard of it being pronounced that way! Yes, I love your emphasis! I hope to share today’s sentence (with credit given to you), with my students.
Thank you for this. I love that you, as a fiction writer are so aware of sounds. You are teaching me (a poet) about plosives. Love how you talk about hard stresses. Please correct me if I'm wrong--but I don't think "tanks" would be included in the assonance--since assonance, too, is about sounds. The long _a_s and not the short _a_ in "tanks." And, yes, congrats on the Pushcart.
Since reading thus, have used this idea twice in my revision. Thanks!
This sentence is among my favorites yet. Personification of the abstract produces fascinating results.
Congrats on the Pushcart nomination!
A pretty darn perfect sentence, if you ask me. Love the noir mood and tone.
Congratulations on the Pushcart nomination! Somewhere around here I have an astonishing Pushcart anthology lying in wait.